Young Minori

I say the prior.Because from my vision, this seems about right for bodily proportion. Keeping in mind it is a young character.But it is hard for me to define because I'm am not sure of the actual age(I'm sure someone with more experience would fair better at a glance).About the character and shading as well. Try shading according to light source in mind. If the light source is ultimately out of the picture. Try imagining where it is while you are coloring. It can give more depth and helps to give dark and light highlights some attention. The farther the light source from a side of the object.The darker it is shaded,and vice-versa(closer to light source).You can just do "sun" and "moon" to start and add on more sources as you progress. This is all that comes to mind foh now lol. I think I'm forgetting something or not(idk). My work-style is clustered.But you can ask me/note me if you don't understand(assuming you favor an aspect of how I compose).  I always check/reply to my notes

I will say also:You've done a great job indicating perspective with colors(like near & far distance) !I'm not sure if the concept naturally came to you.But I like the vastness the night-sky gives off.